1、(a)软弱、羞怯的:if you think ican fill the position after you have read my letter,i shall be glad to talk with you.读完此信后倘您认为敝人可补缺,敝人愿和您一谈。
(b)改写后(较佳):if my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you,i should welcome the opportunity to talk with you,so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、(a)怀疑,不妥、不安全的:if you"re interested,let me know immediately,as i"m sure and interview will convince you i"m the man for the job.倘贵公司有兴趣,请即告知,敝人深信与您面谈可以使您相信,敝人适合担任此职。
(b)改写后:may ihave an interview?you can reach me by telephone at taipei884525between the hours of 5:30-9: evening.可否赐予面谈?您可在每天上午七至九时,下午五时半至九时电884525号。
3、陈腐的句子:hoping you will give me an interview,i am…(我希望您惠予面谈)anticipating afavorable decision,i wait your…(等候您的佳音)trusting your reply will be satisfactory,i remain(静候满意的答复)
4、哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间):won"t you please give me the chance to interview your?i can be reached by calling kenmore69781.恳请惠予面谈。请打电话k-69781
(b)改写后:may ihave the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you?my telephone is kenmore can reach me between nine and five o"clock during the day.可否惠予面谈以便进一步商讨?我的电话是k-69781。我从上午九时到下午五时都可接通。
5、太过自信的句子:i am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements between two and four every afternoon except tuesday you can reach me by telephoning731430.我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四时(星期二例外)打731430号电话通知我。
6、较具体有效的句子。may ihave an interview?my residence telephone is(042) reach me by calling that number until june july2,my address will be kent house,bretton woods,new hampshire.可否惠予面谈?我住处电话为43981号。六月三十日以前我都在上址,七月二日以后,我的新址为新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。